Research Draft

     I was very worried about the research paper being really difficult to write. In the end I am pretty sure that I got my stance on the topic across without actually saying anything in writing about my opinion. I am kind of unsure about if I put the right amount of information from my sources in there. I feel like I might of put too much of my reflection on each protest and what they all meant instead of straightforward information.
     The paper was pretty easy to write because we had already gathered all of the information but the conclusion was hard because wrapping all of that information up into something that closes it was hard. I feel like I need to change some of the quotes in it. I hope the feedback will be focused on where I need more information.