Earlier this week I read a literacy narrative given the title, Write or Wrong Identity, it was well written but I personally did not like it. I felt like the narrative went a little to much into depth and would start on one story but quickly move to the next. It was well written and the transitions were particularly excellent but I could not handle all of the information that was jam packed into one narrative. I didn't understand why the author kept going on and didn't end it sooner so the whole time I was reading it I was just waiting for it to end.
After finishing the narrative I was surprised that it had gone on so long to only made one point. The author could have made the point with just one of her stories and not gone through out almost her whole life. I guess I am making it sound like it was a horrible literacy narrative when I know that it must have been liked to be put in a book specifically to give you good examples of a literacy narrative but I just didn't appreciate the length and uninteresting facts of the narrative.
You did a good job on explaining what the narrative was about. It sounds really good, wish I would have read that one!
ReplyDeleteI didn't read this literacy narrative, but I can imagine how that might have been aggravating. I've always had trouble reading things that continue on and on, moving past the amount of support needed for a certain point.
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